there's still a lot of progress to do actually. The tracks feels oddly empty and badly mixed.
there's still a lot of progress to do actually. The tracks feels oddly empty and badly mixed.
Nguieh, track's done now. I've improved a lot since this.
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J'avais totalement oublié ce son lol
This is decent overall, but :
- The sequenced synth is weird, because too much panned. Nice sound though
- Cymatics samples ? Not sure, but it's pretty obvious that you used presets/already made samples. Also, cymatics samples I believe they are made up by professional producers, and so very amateur producers like you or me can't yet match this mastering quality. Therefore, the samples/presets pretty much clash with the rest of the song. Still, props for using them well.
- The stereo, generally speaking. It feels like all the instruments are at the same place, in front of me.
- The drops are a bit repetitive.
The structure of the song is nice, though. Decent intro, good ambience : each element blends well in this song.
Overall work more on pan/stereo, filling the bits of emptiness, and on sound design. It's always more fun, more interesting, more original to make your own sound.
I hope this will help you improve.
Peace,
WL
i have over 3 years in music experience so i'm not really sure it should be considered armature but ill take it. thank you fro your feedback!
ye... meh.
the song feels like it's generally low cut / badly mastered, and is kind of empty I guess.
Sound design : wtf are those horns ? the lead is very screamy in the intro. I think the sound design is too simple in general, for example at 02:04. But chords are great and melodious.
So overall what you need to work on is mix/mastering, sound design, and working on filling entirely the song. Chords are nice tho
agreed, thanks for the review! I know my mixing sucks atm since i am still trying to learn dubstepish songs, about the horn, i think it gives a pretty good feeling and I love the sound of trumpets and tuba's and real instruments in general, so the only thing i disagree is the sound design, since i tried to give the song something different. Filling the song more would just hurt it in many points, I wanted to leave it simple, maybe a few spots here and there need something more but that's just about it.
incredible
Thank you 😀
NIce but you have to work on music theory
Thanks :3
I know, I really need it :c
Well, the track is a bit dissonant, so you may have to work on that. But the ambience is great nonetheless
thanks for the observation I will work on it
If you did Damso - Macarena that would be good
Maybe I will do Damsowave someday :D
really it's your best lol
LOL really? XD well thank you haha
chords are nice
sub is as thicc as my
good for an old song tbh
Yeah, you might remember how far back it first was, I was much less experienced then XD
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