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lamour braves gens
J'avais totalement oublié ce son lol
just a personal opinion, 808 are not
l o n g
enough
wow anyways
This is decent overall, but :
- The sequenced synth is weird, because too much panned. Nice sound though
- Cymatics samples ? Not sure, but it's pretty obvious that you used presets/already made samples. Also, cymatics samples I believe they are made up by professional producers, and so very amateur producers like you or me can't yet match this mastering quality. Therefore, the samples/presets pretty much clash with the rest of the song. Still, props for using them well.
- The stereo, generally speaking. It feels like all the instruments are at the same place, in front of me.
- The drops are a bit repetitive.
The structure of the song is nice, though. Decent intro, good ambience : each element blends well in this song.
Overall work more on pan/stereo, filling the bits of emptiness, and on sound design. It's always more fun, more interesting, more original to make your own sound.
I hope this will help you improve.
Peace,
WL
i have over 3 years in music experience so i'm not really sure it should be considered armature but ill take it. thank you fro your feedback!
The drums are a bit muffled
I love the ambience though, keep going !
Nice but work on not covering any frequencies with the bass
Basses are dope however
ye... meh.
the song feels like it's generally low cut / badly mastered, and is kind of empty I guess.
Sound design : wtf are those horns ? the lead is very screamy in the intro. I think the sound design is too simple in general, for example at 02:04. But chords are great and melodious.
So overall what you need to work on is mix/mastering, sound design, and working on filling entirely the song. Chords are nice tho
agreed, thanks for the review! I know my mixing sucks atm since i am still trying to learn dubstepish songs, about the horn, i think it gives a pretty good feeling and I love the sound of trumpets and tuba's and real instruments in general, so the only thing i disagree is the sound design, since i tried to give the song something different. Filling the song more would just hurt it in many points, I wanted to leave it simple, maybe a few spots here and there need something more but that's just about it.
incredible
Thank you 😀
NIce but you have to work on music theory
Thanks :3
I know, I really need it :c
Well, the track is a bit dissonant, so you may have to work on that. But the ambience is great nonetheless
thanks for the observation I will work on it
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